This is my beloved-eldest son's first poem. After reading my post (ATN's A to Z), he showed me a sheet of paper and told me that it was his very first poem. I feel so sad to read his poem. It touched my heart so hard. I don't know how he faced this world. As a father, I did my best for him. But these days, things are out of my control already.
He asked me if I could post his poem on my blog and he loved to see that on my blog. So I share his with you all, my friends. What I would like to request you is to leave just a comment for him in English. I want to see him happy to read all of your comment on his poem.
(BTW, he is almost 13 now. He was born on 8-8-97, the 9th anniversary of the 8-8-88)
Thank you all.
A Tear In Black Water
My world is dark, my light is lost, in this forsaken realm.
My exist is just.
I do not remember laughter nor happiness.
Water drips slowly away.
I forgot to smile.
All alone with nothing.
I hear not a whisper, I feel nothing, not the wind of a storm, nor the spray of the sea, nor the fury of mother nature.
I'm nothing compare to her, like a human soul to a god.
A tear in black water is a lone soul in a storm of oblivion.
Why, why has she forsaken me?